Black Poetry : Emotionless Sex

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He was her first lover​
    The taker of her cherry.​
    When she meets him, their bodies dance in rhythms, long ago put in gates to prevent feelings​
    His tounge reigns over her body and his steel remains number one in her heart​
    but she ....to him......means nothing.​
    She has never been in a relationship before.​
    Never even been in love and says she never wants to be....​
    So she lies to her heart,and cries behind the mask​

    Hey eyes dance with something that her heart will never possess​
    She wants him to admit that he loves her and that he is finally ready for a relationship​

    but he won't.....​

    so she doesn't ask.......​

    And so her hollow continues to burn and her heart constantly breaks​
     
  2. Khasm13

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    yeah i feel u swtt...my first was someone similar...
    but it does get betta with time....
    tyte scribe sis...and i hope college life is treating u well...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    mmm...yeah, we all have a story like this
    and it never seems to hurt any less...
    but I'm inclined to agree with Khasm...
    it really does get better...
    Very emotional piece sister...
    Good to see you back on the forum...
    You've been missed... :grouphug:

    Much love,
    Sage
     
  4. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin ya on this one been there. I agree with the others. Keep flowin!
     
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    Can't say that I actually know how it feels to have or give emotionless sex....or any sex for that matter :?: but i liked how you easily depicted it in this scribe. Good job.
     
  6. Pharaoh Jahil

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    This is kind of deep. I like how you shared this thought... scribe on sista.
     
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    this was a deep emtional piece...i been there but it gets better with time
    nice drop and smooth too....Peace Angel
     
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    Not sure what hurts more, to admit that you feel something, or to indeed feel it, but admit nothing. This was filled with heartache, and I could feel it. Life will bring you a more tender experience in the future. Deeply brought...
     
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    there is nothing worse then knowing your feelings arent reciprocated, you painted a vivid portrait of the pain emotionless sex can cause
     
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    For want of love no passion there

    To bring this here for hearts to care... I love your work!
     
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