Black Poetry : Emotional

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  1. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right now everything seems
    to be moving so slow
    But I really cant think any quicker
    cause this liquor In my system
    has taken my body under control and
    I don’t know how much longer I can
    sustain this life Of warm blood
    and red eyes but right now it helps
    to Ease the pain and forget the lies
    and as I sit quietly in
    the Dark solitude of my own mind
    I find time to escape my Depression
    and a safe place to hide
    Everyone thinks they know me
    but not a soul knows of this
    Know one knows about
    the heartache, the pain
    and the Unbearable anguish
    In some ways I’m happy being just where I am
    but can one Really be happy with his or herself
    if know one else Gives a ****
    for so long I was content with my selfish Ways
    but now I just want to go back to
    Being who I was
    when I wanted to be
    who I am today
    And I cant even think straight
    cause she’s stolen my thoughts
    And lost my mind
    and In my times of anger I’ve
    never Been a stranger to suicidal thoughts
    and or homicidal plots On those who have crossed me
    and I don’t want anyone to know About my pain
    but I yearn for someone to care because
    in my Moments of despair
    not a soul has ever been there
    and I Used to dream but
    I don’t even wish for tomorrow anymore
    And in my quest for knowledge
    I lost touch with the lord
    These days all I find sanity in is
    this paper and on these
    Somewhat beastly sheets my
    ink filled pen creeps across
    these Lines flowing freely
    from my mind giving
    my emotions a
    Place to reside
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LP.


    ...when you find you can't talk about it
    writing about it... is the next best thing.

    this piece was so melancholy to me & i
    felt the desolation in each line...
    not assumin' that this is a "personal history"
    but if it is... i wish you perfect Peace. :)

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look to da lord above and find ya peace within
     
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    Have a conversation with the lord, even if its through your flow..
    keep flowing
     
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    i'm always in close connection with the lord. thanks for the advice poets
     
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