Black Poetry : Emotional Rollercoaster

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Poetic*Phattie, Oct 16, 2009.

  1. Poetic*Phattie

    Poetic*Phattie Member MEMBER

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    I'm on a emotional rollarcoaster, It feels like its never gonna stop...
    I have been on this ride for so longgggggggggggg, Guess I'm impatiantly waiting for my brain to pop...

    I'm just a bit confused though I'm not even sure how I got on.......... Who in the hell picked this ride, that has me bleeding from the inside...

    In the distance I can hear a faint sound, I'm wondering if this means I'm getting closer to the ground...

    My heart is beating to an unnormal beat, My physical body won't allow me to stay in my seat...

    As I reflect on my position, finding the cause and effect is now my new mission...

    I'm mourning for someone that's not mourning for me, So y in the ***** would I allow MY vision to be weary and this *****A can see...
     
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    karma55 Active Member MEMBER

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    Letting go isnt easy! I felt your flow! Been there and this took me back! thanks for sharing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime shaking loose is hard .....been here before on dat rollercoaster ride
     
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