Black Poetry : Emoetry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Jun 16, 2004.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A combination of my emotions,
    Unsettledness has its devotion.
    Its loyalty, it annoys me.
    One second smiles galore,
    And problems, disturbing situations,
    I have the power to ignore.
    Then suddenly in a second split,
    My zesty spirit is hit,
    With items including,
    Thoughts of you protruding with,
    Pins of doubt,
    Piercing me from the inside out.
    Sense of uneasiness, restlessness,
    Overshadows me and has its success.
    My mind consumed, but two things stand out.
    God and you…
    He’s the subject of my meditation.
    You’re the subject of myyy….infatuation???
    All of this…seeds sown and how it’s grown
    The germination,
    Of emoetry…
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very well put together and laid out, I like where you took this, thanks for sharing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i'm feeling u on dis u expressed it so well
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Chastity,
    Nice job, poetry in emotional motion.....
    emoety very clever.....and nicely written....

    Peace and Blessings
     
  5. Bluewater

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    very nice flow
    you left and impression indeed
    in this flow...
    keep it coming
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  6. PropheticNsyght

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    Mannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn! this was delicious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Emotions emotively expressed in poetry, this was laid just right.