Quiet Poetry Lounge : Embracment

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Warmth of handz
    a gentle touch
    caressing mentals
    hearts embrace intently
    a moment shared rapidly
    in the beat of emotions
    love is sprayed wildly
    cross the land of peace
    smiles join together in
    laughter

    whispers heard sweetly
    true affection composed
    washing away mis direction
    as ya thoughts guide all
    ya romantic desires
    inside ya quiet embrace
    singlely real passion
    become untouchable
    we cuddle under blazing starz
    and a glow of moonlight
    in a free land of pain
    a place many have tryed to go
    yet never completed just notions
    and within our fate of faith a bond
    born with the greatest embracment

    looking into da future
    where seed is plant
    offspring bring forth a nuture of love
    a compromised feelin'
    to hold in rapture
    as it captures thou true meanings
    my eyez look beyond which set sight
    i see the day u and me harvest friutful
    deeds
    all creed will come where we become
    a onesome whole ova a place to rise up
    and honor thou Father
    unto u i leave a legacy
    a respectful trust
    a secret shared
    a heart to love and be loved
    i lay down to u my main frame
    and compassional faith to carry on
    all i take is a soul forth it's not mines
    quietly i pass on to enternal sleep

    we shall meet again openly & very GODLY
    if u believe now i wave bye bye
    not long quiet mass cover me and i will rise
    from my emptyness to a glory of reason
    and their my peace in quiet lay i grasp it
    all into my mental to share
    my face say it all
    look deeper , feel it concored into ya mind

    it ain't ova !!!!
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful!!!
     
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    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet a very nice poem
    keep on keepin
     
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    I was really feelin' the pictures you painted. You've done an excellent job of drawing the reader in to your view, well done poet, great scribe.

    ~Malicious~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thanks Royal_T i compromised dis vow ....

    Daya .....unto u i thanketh thee openly

    Malicious.......Thank u nice to be felt through open vibe

    remember it ain't ova pt.2 comming soon !
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed cindy u hit home honey !
    u said it so well
     
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    wow Rich this is a masterpiece. Write on
     
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    Thankz Morphic ya words mean so much to me .....
     
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    embracement of two is da warmth of the soul
    as two clash together in gentle hush !

    ya feel me .....
     
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    I am going to look for Part II
    this is very intimately scribed
    totally mesmerizing