Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joyce, Aug 29, 2001.
Embracing the dawn,
She prepares for a new day.
A bag lady's hope.
A NEW DAY IN TOMORROW'S WORLD
HOPE BE OF SHE WHOM LOOK YESTERDAY
now that was some true depth
in 3 lines!
yes...you paved the way for hope with just 3 lines...very tight!!
injoyed this ray of light for the bag lady...
very nicely done Joyce....
Joyce up in here showing us what a haiku really is !!!
Go 'head Gurl !!!
Love It !!!
Queen of haiku.... had to bring this one up..
yea and i think this is everyone's hope
i like it
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