Black Poetry : eloquent ****

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  1. jahvandus

    jahvandus Active Member MEMBER

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    Eloquent ****

    blowing out innocence
    smelling the impish residue of evening
    misbehaved thoughts connecting sexualities thus…
    gazing at drops,
    excuse noir expectation structures
    of unorthodox missions,
    positions kept
    burgundy sights,
    invited scenes of cli-T-oris thick stamina
    sucking eager centuries lost in gender
    judgmental thoughts
    I must insist…
    bronze shaded cheeks
    willingly spread
    savor my theory of nurturance whispers
    “indulge me deeply”
    your whipser
    interruptions of dildo lullabies
    nurse one back
    candle wax tip strokes inside you
    holiest orgasmic platform experiences
    facial straddles,
    murmured rhythms,
    eruptions
    scented fruits caressed,
    creviced dreams indulge your deepness…
    I kiss you only out of mischief,
    but hold you eternally

    Jahvandus Kwu
    © 2001 ObsidianSoul Publishings
    all rights reserved
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang!

    almost too pretty to....

    feel.....:D

    thank you jah

    ~whew~

    a
     
  3. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay I'm awake!!!

    Boy i really had to come up for air on this one...because i was all up in dhis. For a minute there i thought i was the words inside this here. I got the mental flash backs and all. You got a girl mind working ova here...I'm going back to stare back into the page. Just to let you know though....this was a tight scribe...
     
  4. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    entering from the garden with my eyes covered

    can i look? :cool: ahh, that's better. Jah, man this scribe is tight. i am loving how the hiatus has incited such a flow in you ...

    ken the pen hot bro'

    ***returning to the garden***
     
  5. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Jahvan this was quite the eloquent piece! :wink:
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JAH....

    eloquent... indeed!
    almost too sweet for the word f*uck... :)


    Peace.
    SunShyne~
     
  7. jahvandus

    jahvandus Active Member MEMBER

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    eloqently appreciated!!!

    excuse me if it was attached to a little steam
    one of those vibe nights

    jah
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooooohhhhhhhhh

    Im tellin yo momma!!!!!! :) Eloquent for real dildo lullabies.......


    *my mind is wurking ovatyme*
     
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    My my my.

    (With folded hands)

    My, this was an eloquent ****.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!!

    SO HOTTT!! STUFF HERE........YA FLOW ON HEA!:toast: :toast:
     
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