Black Poetry : elissa

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  1. midnightsson

    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The days turned into weeks, the weeks transformed to months
    the feelings have emerged, emotions running away
    thoughts of her take over my mind, like they had help from the armed forces
    her name on my tongue sounds like a sweet melody
    We’re both Gemini’s, and Gemini’s are astrologically known for
    magnetic personalities.....
    She must be the positive to my negative, the proton to my neutron
    together we will form electricity unmatched by raw lightning
    thunderbolts of pure adrenalin race through my body at the very thought
    of her voice.... her face flirts around with my mind and makes my meditations
    one-dimensional
    she has an infectious laugh, and contagious good humor
    but when she’s sad... it’s like the clouds start blocking the sun....
    When I hear her in pain it cuts into my heart, and I want to hold her
    until her shoulders stop shaking in sobs
    she’s made a couple mistakes, but who among us haven’t?
    She bounces back like a rubber ball at the end of a string
    and her bubbly personality is kinda catching
    I’m hypnotized by the sheer sensuality of her passion
    I thought she was incapable of reaching the heights she has, so quickly...
    This is the best time I’ve ever had, being proved wrong....
    We’ve created a bond without any physical contact
    the images in my head threaten to explode into reality
    waiting to meet her is pure agony
    I want to sooth her sorrow with a soft word and gentle kiss
    I want to relax her worries with a warm bath and long back-rubs
    I want her to calm my tension with a sensory overload of pleasure
    I want her to uplift my heart with a simple impassioned touch
    we can be the perfect picture of completeness
    be the yin to my yang, the bread to my butter
    I want to share your pain, joy, and excitement
    I want to stay so close to you that we share a heartbeat....
    Thinking about holding you close, causes my breath to catch in my throat
    my pulse quickens and my stomach gets queasy
    because Elissa, you make loving you so ****ing easy!!

    Derrick H.
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh lord have mercy
    this is realy beautifulllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    what is stopping you brother Derrick ...
    go for it...

    if elissa reads this ....she would meld like ....like
    like anithing that could meld ......
    because i, m like a puddle of"" me ""right now...
     
  3. midnightsson

    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hahaha...thank you liberty!! I appreciate the words...
     
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    Beautiful poem and one that definetly needs to be read by Elissa.
    if only more men had so much passion.
    Nice piece.
    *Emma*
     
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