Black Poetry : ELIMIDATE !!!

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    She was da cold of love
    da same blaze to burn
    i held no key just hope
    the justice was sexuality
    a moment of da night
    a heated passion of flight
    she was heavy and dark
    cold and nasty left a big
    void of empitness inside
    i'm hollow to her trapped
    essence but i vow not to
    be taken under by da lust
    her body was curvey and
    in waves lips of fire
    and eyez of addition to make
    u lose insanity she walks
    with a sway of beckoning
    temptation she speaks soft
    and yet hard to bury u in
    her nasty freakiness
    spreading her wings of joy
    all u see is da under world
    of darkness wet and explosive
    with no security, no escape
    her had breast like a beast
    with eyez to mesmerize u
    and bumppers of bongo's
    tappin , tappin in jiggles on
    every wiggle posed to blurry
    vision and take mindz deep
    her hair was sandy and coal
    black and skin of a cloud
    finger to bite she make u push
    she pull deeper in with every
    range motion and twist
    i felt her pressing body
    sweaty and hot she was feverish
    her shadow surround u in depth
    like running in da muddy river
    with time against fate my heart
    beats on a rapid pace but my love
    was much more , more then she
    could hold or stand from da passion
    of reality and deep love of truth
    she was a dayum dream coz i
    E~L~I~M~I~D~A~T~E~D her funky A%%
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...ooooo...k
    I see u resisting the
    ultimate temptation
    to which all men will fall...
    at some point in love
    hmmmm...this was some journey

    Resist and eliminate...brother
    I hear u flowing up in here...
    Sage
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed what seem a full date of temptation & lust of
    what set to be a freak show or a moment stand for one night
    i flip to vision it and see the truth now i E~LIMI~DATE all thoughts
    for i lust not nor am i a scrap off da plate but a heart of true love
    indeed she was eliminated by my handz , body and mind
    I'm Free ........................lol
     
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    ScorpioStylez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :karate: Kicked 2 the Curb :laugh: Rich it has been a min since I passed theese pages but it's always good to read your poetry.


    "If It's A Scorpio, It has style!"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey Scorpio wit style !
    yeap to da curb from my mind and out my heart coz it was a myth moment
    of heated passion not love whewwwww! happy to see u on da page
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a tale this was off the hook...
    nice write poet!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz Angel sometime what we hold in our head be a myth of what we
    really see so we wash it clean from the reality and let it all go even sometime
    the one u think is it is only to be elimidated from your heart and mental
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Too bad I couldn' have read this earlier, cause this sounds like a nightmare, with that monstrous description Rich, and I don't want to have any bad dreams. Whew, that was quite a description.
     
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    lol........naw not a monster but a myth of image from da deep
    passion of yesterday thankz for da visit and support here
     
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    ENCORE!!
    VERY NICE DROP