Black Poetry : elements of my soul

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Malik, Jan 27, 2001.

  1. Malik

    Malik New Member MEMBER

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    earth
    is my foundation and molds my creation

    wind
    flows through me and cleanses my sin

    water
    purifies life and perfects my existence

    fire
    ignites my desire and burns away my fear


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    © Copyright 2000. Mario Starks, aka: Malik
    More of my poetry can be found at http://www.digisoul.com
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    thanks for sharing your soul with us
    nice peace Malik
     
  3. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YEs thankx
    And Please do flow on...
     
  4. Ladysoul

    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "fire
    ignites my desire and burns away my fear"

    I loved that part. Although it was short, it said a lot to me
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    elementally correct...! DO YA THANG BROTHER.
     
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