Black Poetry : Electric Shock

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  1. ang-EL

    ang-EL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everyone is under the gun
    U cant run,... you cant hide nothing new is under the sun
    assainated on a capitol level
    they took it to christ aint nothing changed so we know whos the devil
    from the cross, to the nuse, to the chair
    contreversial topic but like the homey N.O.R.E."I dont care"
    you can lean widit bounce witit and ride all night
    roaming the streets in darkness avoiding the light
    raising ya suns to be the ones next millinium
    rim spinnin, ice grinnin, mindless criminals
    affending em braking bending them unlocking the locks
    mind blocks are expected but these electric shocks
    are comming through the street talking
    gangsta thugs they street walking
    dying mentally dead with Al Sharpton and Farrakhaan
    we still dying blind leading the blind underminding the minds
    of savillians they camaflouged like camillians
    agents of Patriot Act stalks the billions
    truth be told but only by the bold and the beautiful
    desiring hoods thats more sutible
    and pushin back studio gangstas like cuticles
     
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    The first two lines said it all for me!

    But, the whole is conveyed in a passionate voice!
     
  3. ang-EL

    ang-EL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many are called but few were chosen
    Some died tryna keep their necks and wrists frozen
    The days of olden get sowed in with an omen
    But the golden age of the Moors is unfoldin
    Whats the issue?.... its called Nationality
    Cause being a black ****** in the land is a tragety
    Where reality truely is a fatality
    Addicted and street inflicted mentalities
    under the train tracks is hood shooting galleries
    and selling crack is ya 9-5 sallery
    To make it out the game is like a energizer battery
    How it keeps going and going I think it had to be
    A set up ***** shut blacks not a Nationality
    Every thing is down in the hood except caualties
    the Strategies of dealing with crime is sooo challanging
    Wannabe teachers in schools in mismanaging
    But if you can hear and comprehend more than chicken and beer
    Shake ya hips and smile baby this will lift ya fears
    Poppin ya clutch caue minds back in gear is a must
    Straight from 0 to 60 and back and leaving dust
    In the eyes of opressors Im reclaiming the flock
    So whatch out for the lightning and electric shock:em0100:
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Well, well, well! You throw it right on back, dontcha!


    That line spoke so much in five words!
     
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    yo sun...u got some serious flow....
    daps....

    one love
    khasm
     
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    ang-EL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank yall and likewise.:hi:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop this was off da hook
     
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