Black Poetry : ...Electric Energy...Sexual Energy...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Jul 21, 2004.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i haven't been on here in a while...due to my illness...but i'm getting better...for those who remember me....i've missed you...i see some new names on here and i hope to get to know them...its good to be back for a while...i haven't written much lately...cuz life is hard...but it eventually gets better...hope u enjoy this...


    jolts of sexual energy
    pour into my empty
    vessel of tainted love
    pure from your touch
    a flinch of pain surrounds me
    soon covered by your crowning
    the power of our bodies
    makes me crave so loudly
    never felt such a spark
    such an unethical spark
    that makes me lie in arch
    to recieve all of your mark
    waves of sweet electricity
    in and out they engulf me
    our heat brings us closer see?
    magnets through sexual energy
    sharp impact shows you need me
    you feel it to as you glide in me
    electric currents and blinding light
    is what we had on several nights
    its a pity we've thrown it all away
    nights of electric love we made
    but now the light gradually flickers away
    a hundred nights of passion thrown out by one night of hate....
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now I love this piece it had a twist at the end and held my attention...Welcome Back Home:wave::wink: :heart:
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    LovelyGoldenOne

    WELCOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE HOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:

    That was a very nice drop. I love your flow.

    I can read that piece with some nice slow song playing in the background. Well, that's the way I felt when I read it...until you put the twist in it and made me wake up from my fantasy. :D

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts with us.

    :toast:
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks so much for the comments and welcome:) its good to be back...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome backkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk!
    hot tyte drop got me jumppin gurl
    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :spinn:
     
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    Wasn't expecting that ending. Up until that point, it was simply a spicy piece. So good to read you again. Nice to "see" ya. :)
     
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    wow!!! tyte drop girl!!! this was scorchin!!!

    Welcome back!!!!! :grouphug:
     
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    GIRL THAT WAS HOTTTTT!!! Keep doing ya thing cuz im ready for sum more. :spin: :deal:
     
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    thanks for all the comments :) i'll be writing more soon...
     
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    SHES BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    of course we missed you sista NO one does it like you do :)
     
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