Black Poetry : Either you're all the way in or you're all the way out

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by asimplepoet, Dec 10, 2009.

  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You so dayum wish-washy
    One day you are all into me
    and the next you killing me softly
    But my brother no more, NO MORE!
    Either you in it for the long haul
    Or you need to get to stepping
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    .

    But if you chose to stay
    Then you must always...
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    Stand
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    With
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    Me!
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    Build me up, don't tear me down
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    Support me and my efforts, don't sabatoge my efforts
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    Guide me, don't mislead me
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    Be my friend, not my enemy
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    Love me, don't just like me
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    Hold me, don't just touch me
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    Receive me, don't reject me
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    Walk with me, don't walk away from me
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    But most of all...
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    Stand
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    with
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    me,
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    STAND WITH ME!!!"
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Oooo-kaaay.

    Well, eruh...Sister ASP, this was...full of PASSION and was PALPABLY emotional..


    It sounds like the words of somebody "gettin' tired of being sick and tired."


    And very WELL SAID! :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes true dat if one won't stand beside you let it ride in da bye and bye
     
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