Black Poetry : ego tippin

[daroc]

tripping on shoe laces from owns foot
intent spun of spider webs of irony
walking mighty on water that greed drank
keepin self on mntain atop city sheeps
the inner being praised but ignored
scales tippin self drippin vision lost
soul lost soul lost self never xcepted

 

[watzinaname]

The manner in which we get in our own way...countless. We're at our best when we allow ourselves to just be. Diggin your style here poetess, do flow some more.

 

[daroc]

thanks! for your response!

was blessed to be in the presence of eugene redman, founder of the kwansaba.. so i been putting my pen to work these last few days

 

[$$RICH$$]

this was well done and spoke to me .....lovin ya pen sis

 

[Harry Hyman]

Daroc - There is a poignant undercurrent behind your poetry here. It demands the reader to peruse this several times to prod the thinking. Enjoyed very much your craft of words. You did good Daroc. Namyh