Black Poetry : Eggs & Honey

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  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I told her she could come over
    She asked if she could spend the night
    She said she was feeling lonely
    She needed me to make it right
    Diggin' the way she wore her jeans
    How, in right places they were tight
    There's something she wants to give me
    Says it will be something I'll like

    Her smile is so bright & amazing
    I see it, I'm dazzled, I'm drawn
    Speaking softly, her voice is velvet
    Indeed, her words are like a song
    Wondering how she can be 5' 3
    And still have legs that look so long
    These thoughts getting me so excited
    It's becoming hard to stay calm

    She told me how bad she wants it
    She says she wants no mercy
    Saying she'll be my ice water
    Because I seem to be so d*mn thirsty
    Preparing for a thrilling ride
    Because her body's so curvy
    Coming in so fresh & so clean
    But, ready to get so dirty

    I will show no fear when touching
    I will not be afraid to squeeze
    I won't be afraid to look in her eyes
    When she's in front of me on her knees
    I'll stick it right in her ignition
    Hear her roaring when I turn the keys
    And, then see some eggs & honey
    Coming out of those birds & bees
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heyyyyyyyy hooooooooooo yeah like them Eggs and honey. well sam i am how about having some of my green eggs and ham. love this honey keep them flo's coming.:love:
     
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    whoaaaaaaaaa! i like this drop
     
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    **** this was original and tight!:love:
     
  5. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for checking it out, I'm glad it was enjoyed
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ha, Word Up! man them last two line is boombastic!!! You just set a precedent up in this piece with that ending. Take yo Bow!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Creatively spicy. I really enjoyed this drop.
     
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    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed this too! Well written!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    This was a hot piece poet
    I was loving this one
    Much Love poet
     
  10. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, thanks for all the positive feedback. I had fun writing this one, so i'm glad someone enjoyed reading.
     
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