Quiet Poetry Lounge : Edition

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GeneticSoul, Jan 2, 2004.

  1. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My, new edition to my lyrical masterfold is pretrudiing from its sprial bounds
    where my thoughts...emotions...transgressions...
    my heartfelt essense
    mypower of meekness...
    my complex sophications of my free orantation
    my pessimistic veiws on an optomistic level
    my feelings...and my preseptions of life
    my impressions on love
    my tender/compassionate inklings of men
    my painful yet painless sensations experienced when i am stirred into sympanthy anger love fear and hate
    my sentiment that creates a mixture of thoughts and feelings passing down into my hand through my pen and on to my new edition...
    my words, displayed ferociously, ravenous, and vicious to the eyes that read them yet...
    mild, meek, tame, calm, serene....even placid to the lips that utter them
    because my new edition will know you senseless...

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    this is an ode to my diary my spoken words that heal my soul...
    my detacation to the friendship i have made with a piece of paper
    Gen~Ethic Soul
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very tyte scribe i'm feelin it in my bones
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like the vibes from this
    nice write indeed...Angel
     
  4. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much love

    thanks much love to ya

    glad ya feelin me

    genethic soul
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When we let the emotions spill onto paper, what a flow we have, as is this one. Liked the vibe.
     
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    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much truth

    yes i feel that... its like writin connect all of our hearts like a chain and wee feed off of the vibes otheres give us putting us in a mood or out of one...

    much truth
    Gen~Ethic Soul
     
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