Black Poetry : Eden

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Feb 17, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we used to build sandcastles
    in the Savana,
    when ur kisses
    were better than wine,
    i used to draw spineless lizards
    whos tails tickled ur arched toes....

    got high off of ur atmospere
    and drifted on the curves of your
    cheeks..

    i was immortal...

    u fed me grapes
    from an oasis in the
    Sahara Desert,
    went back to the garden
    of EDEN
    where i stroked the hairs
    on your head trying to
    awaken new orgin
    in every strand....

    i waited while u checked
    to make sure
    the animals still
    bowed when i walked pass

    Queen of the Nile
    Princess of the Seven Moons
    The Crowned Godess....

    i was born again.....

    -story

    copywrite 2004, all rights reserved
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    where have you been story...
    this was beautiful...
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey khasm, been have some difficulties, but be warned i will be back in about two weeks at the latest...i was startin to miss the fam, so i decided to drop by...glad everythings alright....
    thanks for reading me,
    much :heart:,
    -story
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey baby gurl miss ya ....nice flow happy to be
    reading u hurry back in full swing ......
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..such beautiful images here...nice to be able to read something else from you.
     
  6. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Divine Reminiscence...

    Long Live tha Queen!

    I Adore this Heavenly PEACE
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes yall, i'll try to be back soon, kay? i'll miss u,
    love,
    -story
     
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    simply beautiful...
     
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    SHES BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
    Awwww YEAH!!! :D sista you been gone TOO long :) now
    ummm ya know that since ya back ya gone have to come wit the LIVE version in voice chat right? :)
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    the_story....

    this is tight. Hot diggity dog. i wanna cus so bad. :lol: :D

    I absolutely loved this piece. :D :grouphug:

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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