Black Poetry : Ecstatic Utterances

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Mar 26, 2005.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here ecstatic ends where the pain begins
    Seven deadly sins vie to do you in
    Sweet and sour sperm
    Score me on a curve ~
    Hallelujah again...
    Good boys and girls
    Inside-out your topsy-turvy grave
    It's about the one you want to serve
    Ain't about that nonsense in the church
    Tell your neighbor what Christ' death is worth
    Making book on the lookout for the Antichrist
    It's the final 'fore get a lease on life
    Sigmund Freud was Oz in this Toto world
    Where atomic bombs make orgiastic noise
    Who could blame us if we shouted out
    MERCY LORD, I'm yours without a doubt!


    Darryl Abdu Omari
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005 :hot:
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovin that Freud line in particular. The whole thing is mad mad tight, brothah, as usual. :hot:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, gempis I paused with that Sigmund Freud line too...the id the ego, the superego, so many different ways of saying that it's all about me. Such a witty poet you are, flow on.
     
  4. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Classic!

    <appears>

    This actually sparked a smile in me. Really enjoyed the playfulness of the lines and wording. A direct contrast to the overall theme of the poem. Great work!

    peace&1luv

    <disappears>
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful...beautiful...and again I say beautiful!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awesome i love when you pen touches the canvas indeed a work of art...
     
  7. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, dearly, Brothers and Sisters.
     
  8. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved this..keep it up :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Amen , Amen to this i felt every bit of it within
    what u pose'd here was awesome bruh !
    yes yes yesssssssss!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's up, Nisa, thanks.
     
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