Black Haiku : eclipse

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    moon in sky tonight
    shadow covered up its light
    laid in shadows long

    aglow in orange light
    then the unveiling, slowly
    nature's miracle

    light fully restored
    the fullness of the moon, back
    appreciate space
     
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    darken burn orange
    shadow out beauty in rays
    clashing moon and sun
     
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    A solar eclipse
    The sun, kissing the moon's face
    How the moon blushes
     
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    moon undercover
    orange mystery, it's smothered
    then unveiled again

    the light returns and
    the shadow passes on by
    moon back in the sky
     
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    As the warm sun shines
    the full moon beams igniting
    the two, shadowing....
     
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    they are connecting
    we watch the awe inspiring
    blackness in the sky
     
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    the ancient peoples
    used to think the world would end
    powerful vision
     
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    clash of tides above
    give a radiant blast off
    naked eye vision
     
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    powerful vision
    blinding the naked iris
    still eclipsing me
     
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    Put your blinders on
    An eclipse can be lovely
    but watch with caution
     
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