Black Poetry : Eclipse

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Monetary, Mar 12, 2003.

  1. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Lot’s of people make me laugh
    Some even make me smile

    A few make me crack the hell up
    And others make me tear up awhile
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    Only one person could make my spirit shine
    And at the same time warm my heart too

    I reflected on the people from my past
    I could only think of you
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    You’ve taught me so many things
    You’ve touched me in so many ways

    So many precious moments I’ve spent with you
    Those I’ll cherish for the balance of my days
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    We can’t be together in the present
    You’ve got things to figure out

    You have deep, dark issues to deal with
    These things I have no doubt
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    I desire to keep you forever
    This must surely be a sin

    My prayers for you will never cease
    In my heart…I’ll keep the memory of you my friend

    By Monetary
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MONEY

    Monetary, like money in the bank
    Your words draw interest!

    1poetsought ~
     
  3. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    1poetsought....thank you very much.

    I love that comment. lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i agree dis was awesome had me into it line by line
    keep stroking dem keyz pleaze!
     
  5. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Monetary!

    Diggin this hea and checkin fa more!

    Reas
     
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    I THINK THAT THE BEST ONE THUS FAR:toast:
     
  7. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    1poetsought: I love those words, bruh. I think I'm gonna steal those. :D

    Rich: Thanks, bruh. Always appreciated and much respect.

    Reason: Thanks, bruh...dapz.

    MORE: hahahahaha Much appreciated, but there are some really hot poetry being displayed. Thanks for the comment.
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

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    awesome
    diggin this flow
    smooth i was in it
    lookin for more
    ya know....
    thanks for sharing
    Peace
    Angel
     
  9. watzinaname

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    This was so sweetly posed, I think quite a few of us have been here, keep flowing.
     
  10. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Money

    This was very sweet and very touching, you worked ya thang on this one.
    Nita
    :heart:
     
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