Black Poetry : Echo's of You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Archival, Feb 4, 2004.

  1. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I sit upon the sands
    watching sunlight dance on water
    a cool wind drifting past me
    it plays across my face
    like a lovers touch
    a silken flow of sensation
    I close my eyes to enjoy the moment
    and a warmth seems to flow from within
    is it my imagination
    did I just feel her fingers on my chest
    I inhale deeply
    as the wind blows across my neck
    like her breath before a sensual kiss
    the warmth seems to build
    and I sigh
    for dare I open my eyes
    or shall I stay like this
    with echo's of you
    forever
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice very nice
    the vibe was on hit
    Peace Angel
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so peacefully beautiful and romantic....keep flowing.
     
  4. Bluewater

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    this is indeed a lovely flow...
    yes yes yes
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very lovely sweet piece i hear da echo's
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my goodness this is just beautiful, from the concept to the words to the flow. whoa!
     
  7. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    As always, great to share a scribe with you all. I'll try to drop by a bit more often.

    Keep the echo alive,


    Infrequently Soulful
    -Archival
     
  8. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was just so peaceful and so lovely...the picture you created was very beautiful. much love to you.
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh this was peace to read

    thank you :)


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    I am in awe....

    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:


    Loving your work!
     
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