Black Haiku : Echoes Of Da Wind

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I hear myself call out to u,
    U're voice as the call of god,
    I hear u when you're far away,
    On a shore, or on land,
    I'm here,
    You're there,
    Togetha we make a pair,
    As our echoes join togetha,
    We can call out to one anotha,
    In silence, or in time,
    Of need when its right.

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    I enjoyed the whole but the last half really touched me in a deep place!

    That was absolutely EXQUISITE!
     
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    Each beckon call is
    in da silent whisper of
    bonding together
     
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    uppin this beautiful piece
     
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    uh... uppin the piece to read it again? or look at the picture, my brotha? LOL

    it is a great poem! :em2300:
     
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    yes true dat my brother
     
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