Black Poetry : ~~~~~~ECHOES(echoes, echoes)~~~~~~~~~

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmmmmm, hmmmmmmm, hmmmmmmmm

    Let's see, let's see, let's see
    I, I, I
    remember, remember, remember
    you, you, you
    and I, and I, and I
    never, never, never
    living apart, living apart, living apart
    The way we were, the way we were, the way were
    I hear the echoes, I hear the echoes, I hear the echoes
    of our distant, of our distant, of our distant
    past, past, past.

    Echoes, echoes, echoes

    Like raindrops, raindrops, raindrops;
    they fall, they fall, they fall
    and breeze, and breeze, and breeze.
    I sink, I sink, I sink
    into this, into this, into this
    windy embrace, windy embrace, windy embrace.
    Our love, our love, our love;
    now an echo, echo, echo;
    a soft whisper, a soft whisper, a soft whisper
    in my ears, in my ears, in my ears.
    Hmmmmmm, Hmmmmmmm, Hmmmmmmmm

    Feels good, feels good, feels good.

    Echoes, echoes, echoes, echoes, echoes.


    ~Copyright
    The year of the Monkey (2004).
    The 93rd year, 4th month, 22nd day
    "Son of the Day Star" Publishing
    ~*PropheticNsyght
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed indeed indeed !!!
    feeling da vibe flow on
    tyte scribing poet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL @ Rich. But I must say, hear, here!!! this scribe does capture the reader.
     
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    Echoes, echoes, echoes, echoes, echoes.....on
    nice one...very creative
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Aaaahhhh yes...feels good when those echos catch up with me...
    and unify into "One Voice"....settling deep in the place they posses...
    My soul...

    Love this flow...and the way you structured it on the page, Very Artistic! :spinstar:


    Beautiful....Encore :spinstar:
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich, Watz, and Angle. My God is all I can say. You all are so beautiful. I'm so moved! Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angelic you are an inspiration pure and simple. You are so precious! Thank you so so so much for your beauty and constant upliftment. I greatly appreciate you dear.