Quiet Poetry Lounge : Ease...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jun 5, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When the ease
    comes upon you
    it is just there.
    It exists in all you knew
    before, but just didn't get.
    It's there in the inkling
    that you felt in your mind
    while your eyes were twinkling.
    It was sensed when his aura
    first met yours, and you entwined
    in the wonder of it all.
    It was alluded to in the kind
    of whispers that send wisps
    of feathery kisses to blushing cheeks.
    It emanates from within throughout
    the universe, for the bliss it seeks.
    The ease of you...
    God sent
    For all that is intuitively known,
    and all that is meant.
    Ease....
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I totally agree,
    we can't shake the ease that's upon us, or do we want to? nice write watz I was really feeling that to the bone, thanks for that. Your writtings always inspire me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis speaks out very well felt flow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "we can't shake the ease that's upon us, or do we want to?" You know queentswana, I didn't realize it when I was writing this, but yeah, sometimes that feeling of ease can take us further within than we are ready to go. Your comments tend to be inspirational as well, thankyou.
    Thanks Rich, this is just a collection of random thughts, wasn't sure about piecing them all together...it felt unfinished, but sometimes that's where thoughts leave us.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so very true
    what can you do
    when the ease
    come unto you
    feeling this
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Blue for your kind response to this piece, which I still feel like adding something to...
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved this Watz

    It flowed "easily". But then again, all of your flows are effortless. You don't even have to try.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, Jazzy, I'm beginning to like this one more...I humbly thank you for saying that it's effortless, believe me, often it is not. :)
     
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