Black Poetry : EARTH AN EPIC

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  1. seshendrasharma

    seshendrasharma Member MEMBER

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    EARTH AN EPIC

    Even by bloodshed, which is indefinably superior to gold
    Dreams did not become realities-
    Only fools do not know that
    evolution also is subject to evolution-

    ** * * * * * * *
    When the earth is ploughed with a plough
    Only then it becomes a country
    When the earth is ploughed with a quill
    Then it becomes an epic
    If it is not ploughed either with a plough or quill
    It is merely just merely earth-

    * * * * * * * * * *
    24 hours of distance lies from sun to sun
    only two hearts of distance lies
    from human being to human being-
    The sky opening up its pink folds
    flying itself in the winds of dawn-
    Look! How many riffles of distance lies
    From village to war-

    -Seshendra Sharma
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    abstract and deep...
    just the way i like em...
    i can see that you are not a surface dwella
    welcome to the home of poetic delight
    take the time
    to drop your insight
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & bond
    welcome from above this was very nice flow:)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    i like your work
     
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    you really went deep on that one...nice flow, the two hearts of distance lies human being to human being? sometimes it seems much bigger than that doesn't it?
     
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    hey man, welcome to destee's place,
    :wave: :wave: :wave:
    i hope u like ur stay here :heart:
    much love,
    -story
     
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    I enjoy the way you think, present and flow. Welcome! :) :wave:
     
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