Black Poetry : Early Morning Rise

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  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    laying here filling my heart
    with the tiny things about you i adore
    your words tracing their fingers
    along the curves of my silhouette
    moonlight kissing me sweetly
    on the back of my neck

    your sensuality rewriting the way my body aches
    my flesh longing for your fingertips to listen
    to the parts of me no other man may whisper to
    your heart speaking to my heart
    in multiple languages and dialects
    each syllable begging my skin for the heat in me

    the thought of living forever within your love
    extends the entire length of my desire
    as i wait patiently for the day
    when i can hold you in my arms
    my precious moon watching over us
    as i welcome you to love everlasting
     
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    Thank You TotalView!
    You always led us to and/or back to everlasting love! We need you all the time SIS!:)
     
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    LOL. You know...I never thought of it this way but strangely enough...it's TRUE! Enjoy everlasting, Candee!

    (smile)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    A everlasting vibe that will play again and again in da mind .....awesome write
     
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    Thank you. I appreciate your kind words.

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    laying here filling my heart
    with the tiny things about you i adore
    your words tracing their fingers
    along the curves of my silhouette
    moonlight kissing me sweetly
    on the back of my neck

    Now this is what i feel when i wake up besides him every morning. Nice poem, Sister TotalView,...
     
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    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, Sister MsVeraisblessed, for the kind words. I appreciate them and you.

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    your sensuality rewriting the way my body aches

    RED HAWT FIYAH!!!!!!


    and errythang else you said is SKA-REEEMIN at me!!!

    thank you, sis!
     
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    LOL, Sis...this made me giggle. Thank you so much. I always look forward to reading your responses, cause they always make me feel. You're a treasure. :heart:

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