Black Poetry : Early Morning Rise

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Feb 26, 2012.

  1. TotalView

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    candeesweet going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Thank You TotalView!
    You always led us to and/or back to everlasting love! We need you all the time SIS!:)
     
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    LOL. You know...I never thought of it this way but strangely enough...it's TRUE! Enjoy everlasting, Candee!

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    A everlasting vibe that will play again and again in da mind .....awesome write
     
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    Thank you. I appreciate your kind words.

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    laying here filling my heart
    with the tiny things about you i adore
    your words tracing their fingers
    along the curves of my silhouette
    moonlight kissing me sweetly
    on the back of my neck

    Now this is what i feel when i wake up besides him every morning. Nice poem, Sister TotalView,...
     
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    Thank you, Sister MsVeraisblessed, for the kind words. I appreciate them and you.

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    your sensuality rewriting the way my body aches

    RED HAWT FIYAH!!!!!!


    and errythang else you said is SKA-REEEMIN at me!!!

    thank you, sis!
     
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    LOL, Sis...this made me giggle. Thank you so much. I always look forward to reading your responses, cause they always make me feel. You're a treasure. :heart:

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