Black Poetry : Dying to live ~ Living to die….

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonder if it will ever be or will
    I always get blown to the wind…
    Dying to live
    Living to die….
    Stormy weather as the clouds
    Become dark and take me in.
    Trying to escape…
    Trap in a closet of this thing called life
    Trying to make it
    Trying to look up
    When I get pulled back down..
    What am I trying to give?
    When it’s not giving to me…
    Many dreams and wishes
    Vanish out of sight
    Trust gone heart burn
    Misery in my history
    For my future
    I am trying to change
    Dying to live
    Living to die….
    But I pretend to be happy
    When all is crappy
    Feeling like I am in whirl wind..
    Drop to my knees..
    Lord please pull my weight
    For I cant fight this battle no more..
    Crying in my sleep
    Crying in my thoughts
    Crying cause I am lost
    Bring me home
    Sweet glory
    Peace is laid but the pain burns
    Drowning and I cant breath….
    What am I trying to give?
    When it’s not giving to me.
    As the world turns
    Dying to live
    Living to die….
    Dying to live
    Living to die….
    Lord they think they know me…
    But the pain is changing me
    And I can’t seem to deal
    For the wind seems foul
    And my heart just dies
    I wonder if it will get better
    Or will I be fighting all my life…
    So empty and trying to understand this all
    For the pain is made of hell
    As the rain becomes cold
    And freezes my soul
    Step on step over….
    Dying to live
    Living to die….
    Peace in the valley
    But the pain…….
    I can’t seem to bare…
    Left on this earth alone will I survive through it all
    They say want don’t kill you makes you strong..
    So I am holding
    Dying to live
    Living to die….
    Wonder if it will ever be or will
    I always be blown to the wind…
    What am I trying to give?
    When it’s not giving to me.
    Dying to live
    Living to die….

    (C) 2004
    passage out
    of untitled life
    Chapter II
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I hear ya and feel ya here well felt scribe
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was an emotional piece...
    i hope some of these felings were released...tyte
    one love
    khsm
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Rich for the love and support on this...:kiss:

    well, Khasm i dont know we will see as i keep writting the story how it goes
    ..thanks for the love and support :shades:

    Peace and love
    my sweet Brothers
    Angel
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    so goes the struggles of life.

    Keep the faith...keep on steppin'...and keep on keepin' on.

    :thanks: for sharing your deepest thoughts with us.

    :toast:
     
  6. Eric Mitchell

    Eric Mitchell Active Member MEMBER

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    I felt this piece whole heartedly.
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovely drop.. thanks for blessin us wit urs
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    emotional flow.

    You have such a way with words and laying thim in such a emotional path. You are like am emotional storm that parres over us in this form and we always accept your forcast.
    Tight drop here angel.........(release ,release, release)
     
  9. PurpleMoons

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    I know what you are feeling Sis!
    I've been there a time our two, three,
    four, ect......But what I found was
    that this too shall past!

    That life is full of lessons and
    until I learned what it was trying
    to teach me I would feel this
    way!

    heartfelt drop!

    Keep it comming!
     
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    If I give you my clutches...you'll never learn to walk,
    luv you...how about you?
     
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