Black Poetry : Dying Inside

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by one_love, Mar 31, 2001.

  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'd always heard
    Your entire life flashes before your eyes
    The second before you die
    That one second
    Isn't a second at all
    It stretches on forever
    Like an ocean of time
    For me, it was lying in the grass
    Watching falling stars
    And golden leaves falling from the trees
    Playing my first baseball game
    Having my first kiss
    I guess I could be pretty pissed off
    About what happened to me
    But it's hard to stay mad
    When there's so much beauty in the world
    Sometimes I feel like I'm seeing
    It all at once
    And it's to much
    My heart fills up like a balloon
    That's about to burst
    And then I remember to relax
    And stop trying to hold on to it
    And then it flows through me like rain
    And I can't feel anything but gratitude
    For ever single moment of my stupid life
    You have no idea what I'm talking about
    I'm sure
    But someday
    Someday you will
    One_Love
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    I Understand

    Completely :jumping:

    remembering the good 'ol days
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ONE LOVE...

    sis... believe me when i say...
    i know what you're talkin' 'bout! :)
    (at least i understand...)

    AlwaysPeace...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I FEEL YA BLOWIN' IN THE AIR
    AS I GLIDE BY>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
    I HEAR YA!
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    KNow ing your Worth is becoming a great thing. Sometimes it is sad that it takes death to bring life, but life is such a beautifull thing. Maybe the death makes you love even more. Maybe we can learn to love life more even without death. Now that would be a marvelous thing.

    I had to die to live. I remeber dieing though. I am was yearning to live. Beauty I shall live.
    Flow on...
     
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