Black Poetry : Dumped Two Days After Valentine's Day

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The poem that you are about to read is as REAL as it gets.....


    I’m just sixteen years old
    But my heart was broken by a twenty four year old
    Not because of cheating but because of the truth I never told
    Oh, how I miss his kisses as rich as gold
    The sound of him as my arms he holds
    But because of the truth I withhold
    He’s not around anymore
    And I’m alone with a heart tore
    Never have I loved one like him or never will I anymore
    For the richest of tears do pore
    I NEVER told him I was sixteen
    Finna turn seventeen
    But that didn’t matter anyway for you have to be eighteen
    To date or talk to a grown man
    I didn’t know that I could lose someone so valuable in one day’s expand
    Nor, did I ever think that he would leave me to date a GROWN woman
    I admit that I started out with the intent to tell him right away
    But day after day
    I began to have feelings so deep that it couldn’t stray
    The truth!!!
    The truth is so hard to tell
    When you have a love that has grown so real
    A love that has gone from a cheap thrill
    To the real deal
    That is what I feel
    I had a body of a grown woman
    Breast that extended miles in land
    And hips that could book any man
    I let it go to my head and thought I was better than
    The next woman
    Which is real as the next omen
    When he stepped to me I was truly feeling him
    His baby light brown eyes, I was feeling them
    And when he looked at me I knew I was reeling him
    No **** that, I was wheeling him
    I couldn’t believe he was talking to me
    I had all the girls in the neighborhood envying me
    Just because I had a man twenty three
    Turing twenty four
    I thought for sure
    The truth would be told
    Before my name on his heart could ever be engraved in gold
    But I guess I was wrong for we both had our hearts sold
    In just one stare behold
    A year went by and everything was gravy
    Gift galore and he was calling me baby
    Sex was good and I forgot all about me being a baby
    I played the game to the tee
    And I was proud to be his lady
    I mean after all my boyfriend drove a car and others my age were ignored by me
    Never once did he ask the age of me
    Never once was the truth told by me
    Never did I let the truth known by he
    Then the day came
    And my lust was to blame
    For the selfish game
    I played with his heart untamed
    I never thought that I could get him in trouble
    In jail and life on struggle
    I just thought of what he could give me reason I didn’t have to struggle
    I was in love for the first time
    But it didn’t last long
    This story of mine’s
    For he found out and this is my rhyme
    Of the wine and dine
    That he gave me combined
    With the love we shared resigned
    I thought we could grown into something so wonderful
    It was wonderful but the time was terrible
    We were both mature
    And the expectations was always captured
    But it’s because of me the love did a departure
    BUT IT WILL ALWAYS BE THERE



    I’m sorry Michael, I never meant to hurt you........I ALWAYS meant to LOVE you

    Relationship date
    (January 3, 2003- February 16, 2004)
     
  2. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :grouphug: Oh babygirl, I have been in this situation once before.... Trust me, things will work out for the better..... and when in doubt, God knows best.........
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww, this really pulls at my heart. what a hard lesson to learn. but Foxi, you are so strong and brave and intelligent. you will be fine. just let all the emotion come out, girl. thinkin of you.
     
  4. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah, I know some day I probably will....but for now I will just lie in the bed I made....I know the next couple of days will be hard for me....thank God I don't have to see him everyday....he stays in my old neighborhood.....but I will forever thank of him.....thanks Da1whoownslife and gempis.......thanks for your advice....
     
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    Many moons ago, lol, I was 16 and looked grown to some grown men. But I had already seen by my girlfriends' experiences that nothing good would come from lying, or from telling the truth and going out with a grown man anyway. Be glad he was man enough to admit that 16 was too young, I had men who would have dated me anyway....Peace.
     
  6. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you name....I'm glad he was wise enough too....we might have made it to the alter and then it would have been to late.....I sincerely miss him though....maybe when we're grown we may reconcile with each other....but for today....it's a NAY.... :crying: :crying:
     
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    Girl I think many of us have been in that situation b-4
    but to help me through I have see it as a love loss and a love memory gain.
    but to each its own. I really enjoyed it and it brought back my love memory to. thanks for that scribe.

    Blessing intinually.
    jah diva
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww, babygirl this was so hearfelt
    so sorry you had to go through
    something like this......
    time heals all pain
    :grouphug:peace
    Angel
     
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    stay strong baby girl...in time the hurt will fade. i am glad you were able to get your emotions out
     
  10. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well sista...honesty is best...if its meant to be...it will be.
    :grouphug:
     
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