Khasm13 : dumb smirk....

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  1. Khasm13

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    riding the wave of chastisement
    in your eyes an eerie glint
    i'm stuck with no luck and without a cent
    no clue...not even a lil hint
    to why it is i'm standing here getting clowned on
    like it was a major event
    can bygones ever get get gone?
    or will it stay conniptions off and on?

    [email protected]..

    i play joe cool and think of a song...
    as you lambaste my pride, person and my place...
    and all i can do is look at you...
    with a dumb smirk on my face...
     
  2. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!!! ROFL

    I was laughing and laughing and laughing! And it's only because I know what that place feels like!...smh And for fear of just going ALL THE WAY OFF, sometimes all you can do is stand there with a dumb smirk....

    Great write Bro Khasm!
     
  3. 1poetsought

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    We have all been there, brother.

    Perhaps, its what women want.

    I enjoyed this to the utmost.
     
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    Khasm - It's just something we have to undergo like heavy rain, migraines, bone loss, snow blindness, limb amputation, spilled ketchup on new clothes and of course that silence of wordlessness that shouts........Guilty! We've all been there and don't want to go back. But I love your poet's work here and thanks for the reminder. Namyh
     
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    yea real very real

    ya know
     
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    man i sho nuff been there i feel ya here
     
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    It's like getting sucker punched, only in truth they're the sucker for bringing the both of you to that place. Feeling this poet for sure.
     
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    Khasm:
    Before I got to watz post I felt like I was in the mens locker room. lol
    I was like daang....they just talkn bout us. lol
    I wasn't going to post just read and keep it moving.
    Sounded like men talk me. lol
    Seriously though....I hear ya brotha
    That aint all that cool to handle a brotha like that.
    But what did you do???? You know we don't just
    lambaste for nothing. lol

    I love the way you penned this.:)

    Much Luv
     
  9. HODEE

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    Great flow Khasm13

    Wanting to get away:car:


    Maybe as you said....
    All one can do is start a tune in the head
    And stand there with a smirk. LOL
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4EverLuv, I do hear you, believe me. As I read this piece, something rang true, particularly in the verses that I quoted, in dealing with a few men in particular. Guess it can be a problem with either gender, at least that's how I see it.
     
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