Black Poetry : Dumb It Down

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Mikha'el, Dec 21, 2009.

  1. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im Back!.....sorry y'all classes had me tied up n other ish....but this i wrote to dumb it down...basically a remake but...enjoy


    Now hear this don't fear this but feel this

    O wait you can't for the radio mutes it

    And bibles bury knowledge with the death of the sages

    Turn the pages thery all blank mind bleeding from the shank

    As the narrator snuffs ya and cuts ya

    ya vison gets distored you start losing track of ya senses

    No longer can view the world in high definition

    You tune in ya transmission to cable television

    Where the narrator of the story adds his own twists

    Speaks upon his own **** but nobody cares to think

    Minds mesmerized by ideology thats elementary

    And have the nerve to make claims that shame the human race

    Albert einstiens they not they think its haloween

    And people wonder why the world laughs n snickers at our blunders

    Cause we drown our craniums in sugar loaded confections

    Evident by how the sum of the parts works the whole

    Rust up on the joints and bearings but nobody knows nothing

    No offers to be the leader for their mentals are defeating

    The purpose for even having one call us all some airheads

    We all up in the sky leave our problems to the peaseants

    But a wait a second i recokon that our world has no servants

    And yet we leave our problem sitting round like some leftovers

    laziness starts taking over

    Word to hov we dream like hov taking over the globe

    But yet we settle for inferior displacement

    Sam said kiss the pavement

    I told the ***** i ain kissing ****

    He said you better fall in line ***** **** that ****

    Im on some higher level **** i ain coming coming down

    You may have the world fooled but you can't dumb me down
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother you pen was on fire right here. i felt this right down to the bone. I think I might even come back later on in the AM and flow with this.
     
  3. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey Mike thjat was tyte flowin on da remake
     
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    thanks Rich =]
     
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