Black Poetry : Dug even deeper...Under My Christmas Tree

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There are always plenty of presents
    underneath my Christmas tree.
    But this year I ask the Lord
    for more than earthly glee.
    Dear Lord I ask you to package
    the strength to endure,
    the end of the year is near,
    weeks remaining, four.
    Keep me from wanting to scream
    after every horrible dream,
    from needing to cry
    because you had to die,
    from wanting to hide
    since I lost my pride.
    Santa is way out of his league,
    my dear.
    I need the blessing of my Jesus
    to make it through this year.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed gift wrap thy Father blessing is there for thee
    under the christmas tree just hold faith ...very nicely
    done and the prayer to one whom are in heaven
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich. Sometimes all we can do is hope and pray.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's the best thing for whom hold faith
    believeth in thee forth love of he is inside
    every prayer whereas answered unto thee

    continue coz prayer is all we have that true
    to heart when comfort is needed
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well posed....
    i agree with Brother Rich on this..
    much love to ya...
     
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    wow
    i love the simple yet profound message of this. seems the things i need most can't be put under the tree either, watz. feelin you
     
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    i know da feeling...mos def
    tyte piece right here
    one love
    khasm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you're feeling this, Mzblkangel and Khasm. Thank you, gempis your words humble me.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling the insight on this drop..thank you indeed
    Peace
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's said he makes a way out of no way. Glad you found it insightful, I try to speak form the heart.
     
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