Black Poetry : DUAL NATURE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Froggy1, Jul 19, 2005.

  1. Froggy1

    Froggy1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DEMON: HEY FROGGY WHATS UP AINT SEEN YOU IN A MINUTE, NOW THAT YOU GOT ALL HAPPY IN YOUR LIFE EVIL CANT GET WITH IT? THOUGHT I WAS YOUR MAN YOUR FROG HELP YOU THROUGH THE FOG.
    ME: ALRIGHT THE REASON WE AINT TIGHT NO MORE IS CAUSE IVE REALIZED HOW MUCH YOUVE LIED TO ME, WE WAS NEVER TIGHT HOMIE I COULD ONLY MESS WITH YOU A LITTLE BIT IF I MESSED WITH YOU TOO MUCH YOUD GET SOMEONE TO KNOCK ME ON MY BUTT WITH ONE HIT, AND THAT YOU AINT MY FRIEND YOU ONLY PRETEND
    DEMON:WHAT!? DONT YOU REMEMBER WHO GOT YOU WHERE YOU ARE, MR STAR? I COULD HAVE YOU AS THE ALPHA MALE IN ANY TALE GET YOU PAPERSTACKS HAVE BROTHAS SELLING TRACKS INSTEAD OF CRACK SO I GET ALL THIS SLACK WELL I DONT NEED YOU ANYWAYS NEGRO SO F*(K YOU!
    ME: WHAT!
    DEMON: AHHHHH JUST PLAYING NO NEED FOR HATING MAN! I KNOW YOU GOT A FAMILY SON BUT WHAT IF THAT FAMILY WERE TO MEET THE BUSINESS END OF A GUN!
    ME: NO GET BACK DEMON! *SMACKS DEMON*
    DEMON: DONT HIT ME B, DONT YOU KNOW WHO YOUR MESSING WITH SON?
    ME: YEAH A CHILD OF THE EVIL ONE! IN THE NAME OF JESUS
    DEMON: NOOOOOOOO!!!!!
    ME: YESSSS GOOOOOO!!!!!!!
    DEMON: THOUGHT WE WERE TIGHT!!!!!!!!!
    ME: LET THE EVIL BE KILLED BY ITS OWN BLIGHT
    DEMON: ILL BE BACK ALRIGHT
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime that very demon can get into souls
    with it grip and tight hold to fold and stroll da
    mind to a controling blind divine hell shine but
    wise as can be u slap da demon back off thee

    this was grade A prime choice i be diggin this one froggy1
     
  3. BrownEyed Girly

    BrownEyed Girly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow. the dialogue was very gripping. this poem was very unique. much love!
     
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    I love this one!!!!!! The struggle between a man or anyone and that darker form is just one of those things that should be spoken on. You spoke on it very well. I'm glad you have the strenghth to call on the almighty when trouble is near. Good flow my brotha, Good flow....
     
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