Black Poetry : DRY POOL

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Too much
    love, I

    River, am I
    Surging with springs
    that seas seek

    Too generous
    giver, I
    Love does not
    kneel to drink
    a drop of me

    Feet, his
    turning into desert places
    dry him, barren
    not even able to
    naturally support
    cultivations of 'ME'

    ...devoid I am not...

    Less shadows,
    Dew and rain - reft
    ...stars and comets
    stare down with
    sharpened faces
    from heavens pitiless/ly
    blue

    ...and at midnight sick with
    faring
    stoop down in his own desire
    to quench the thirst
    grown past all bearing

    Stagnant water
    searing as
    fire
    ...dry as hell

    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2....

    allll rightey then!... :)

    ummm... deepa than oceans! & i know exactly
    what you mean... scribe on poetess... scribe on.

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    N2

    VERY NICELY DONE
    STRONG WORDS INDEED
    YA DEEP YET CLEAR TO SEE
    I FEEL THEE OPENLY FLOW HEAD ON!!
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista GA~

    There ya' go 'exclamatin' the point'!!! I'm glad ya' feel me gurl ~ thank ya'!!
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brotha $$RICH$$

    Ya' know you're alwayz welcome Boo!!
     
  6. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep...yes, indeed. keep on blessin' us with yo scribes. i'm lovin' it!

    ~~mindblos~~
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister~

    As alwayz sis', I'll keep writin' as long as you keep readin' and givin' me some feedback!

    Thanks gurlfriend!!
     
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