Black Poetry : DRUNK OFF RUM

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DRUNK OFF RUM

    Feast taste rum and my voice become like a bass drum
    A low pitch as my flow itch for another drink took some
    More in a glass my brain started to soar fast as I mind drift
    The time went swift my spine couldn’t lift drunk is no gift
    My ears tingling hear bells ringing not even Christmas yet
    Straight rum is solid like brake drums hollow cast so wet
    Make me swallow fast now ready to follow a mass of party
    Folks to where ever not aware and clever feel kind of dizzy
    Like a divine Frisbee my thoughts starting to float so busy
    Sip with my lips and trip imagining stuff should’ve drank Crissy
    Instead of this go my head twist don’t know the way home
    Plus stay alone a whole day gone can’t escape this glass cell phone
    Ring got verizon a bright fellow tight and mellow can you hear me now?
    Good, “taxi I need a ride home my pride in a trap zone with Bacardi
    Not sober come get me my party is over dawg”
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What probably started out as a nice buzz, got out of hand, yeah, rum can be harsh. Hope the hang over wasn't too bad, rhymebad.
     
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    :11600:So did you ever recover?

    Hey bro.....I gotta remeby for that....
    It's an old trick

    Next Time ...all you gotta do is take some Abstinance
    DUDE! you will feel like a Million BUCKS!!!!!

    ROFL

    Flow on Brother Rhymebad!!
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for theprops on this one for real yall
     
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