Black Haiku : Drowning

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  1. tashatoya

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    I begin to drown
    In this ocean we call Love
    No... please, don't save me
     
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    going deeper in
    the depth of love drowning fast
    let me sink on down
     
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    Love's currents have swept
    me away, I struggle for
    naught, I am submerged
     
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    Driftwood can't help me;
    emotional overload
    pulls me down under.
     
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    In earlier days
    afraid to drown due to love
    now I take huge gulps
     
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    cascading heavy
    in the sinking sea of love
    going under fast
     
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    Tashatoya YOU...
    Drowning in a sea of love
    Lost in ocean blue ~
     
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    fallin in da depth
    of ya slumber of chambers
    drowning, going down
     
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    Wow... This is so nice
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    going under-deep
    the abyss of love swallows
    H2O's enough
     
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