Black Poetry : drowning in my blue

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  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes

    i can't seem to

    float to the top of the

    deep

    dark

    midnight
    blue

    and i'm afraid of water

    even if i attempt to move my body

    in swim motions

    i stay in the same place

    looking up to the surface

    sinking deeper

    the light becoming darker

    drowning in my tears

    drowning

    in my blue...
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PEACE WILDFLOWERSEVEN

    I KNOW THIS CONDITION
    ...JUST BLESSED
    NOT TO BE THERE AT THIS MOMENT ....TODAY...
    LATELY WHEN I'M THERE
    I JUST

    ...PRAY.

    LOVE THE WAY YOU BROUGHT THIS
    YOU SET THE KARMA 4 THIS PEICE DEEPLY
    REMINDING ME THAT MY "SOMETIMES"
    ARE NOT "FOREVERS"

    THANX
    LOVE AND RESPECT

    On A Continuous One
    GYPSYMAN
     
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    MzNappi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u go sis!!!
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    At times like these it is best to let go and let God.
    I know you know him:)
     
  5. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you

    gypsy... i love your reply... it is a blessing that it's only sometimes and not forever... and prayer did bring me to the surface, thank you.

    mz. nappi... i always am thankful for your reads... thanks for the support.

    shaz... yes, u know i know him and he has taken it from me... i'm glad u know me!

    -7 :spinstar:
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm always

    comforted when I read emotions I have felt. And know that it's only 'sometimes' ~ there is healing in our testimonies, in our love relationships with God, and the ink He's given us to share.

    feelin this, sis!

    thank you

    a
     
  7. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank YOU alyce... you know you're HOME when folks can relate and testify and help you along the way.
    thank you.
    -7 :spinstar:
     
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    I think atleast
    Every1 in there life
    Feels like they cant get to the top
    Yet we keep trying and one day
    We will get there-Much Love Poet
     
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