Black Poetry : Drops of Saturn

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I extended my arms to
    recieve him
    ...opening up
    to his love is like
    standing in observance
    of a Perseid Meteor Shower
    there's a certain happiness
    that is emitted
    a feeling of being
    overcome by gleaming
    rays of moonbeams
    and glaring things
    the sunlight uncovers
    visible only to
    the naked eye
    His lukewarm lips kissed my
    face and I was treated
    to a celestial delight
    with a flurry of shooting
    stars accompanying
    the moisture as
    four lips parted
    ways...
    After the last quarter-moon
    and before the pre-dawn
    hours
    I wasn't quite certain
    if I would see him again
    but now that
    he has returned
    I've been rejoicing
    --dancing on top of
    different planets
    and dropping
    love seeds
    on Saturn
    to symbolize
    the importance of
    this joyous day
    His heart came back to me
    with the brightness
    that shines of his maker's reflection
    and the image that is shown
    is one of a
    man sent directly
    from the heavens
    unto me




    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
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    unto me she came with
    all nine planets....
    plus two moons...
    one red/
    strung on the tail
    of a shooting comet
    and hung around her
    neck // so "everything"
    she was // galaxies
    placed on the ends
    of her braids chimed
    under the soundwaves
    of moon songs that
    beat one time every
    15 seconds // giving the
    orbits eye time to synchronize
    with her rhythm switching
    from half to quarter to crescent
    to full tempo she gave me
    a jar of moon dust as a momento
    that I spread across the ocean
    so I could walk freely into her
    spirit that travels to different lands
    when she dreams.


    this piece was off da chain N2...once again you have blown the spot up.

    blak
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YA ON A ROLL N2

    I'M ALL SMILES AS I WATCH FROM ABOVE
    DO YO THANG!:D :kiss:
     
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    Blak~

    Have I ever told you how well you dance? Well, brotha, let me be the first to say -- you got a mean "tango" with the web you've woven in this return piece.

    Your gifted, and unique quality is remarkable! I adore your ability to make something so simple come across as something so profound!

    Thank you for this dance!

    One Love...
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    You always come through with a "support group hug" :lol: Thanks papi ~

    One :heart:
     
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    Rykah~

    Thanks for the love sista!
     
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