Black Poetry : Drop the Hip Hop

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Drop the Hip Hop

    In grammar I storm with conjunctions and perform functions
    Such as weddings I’m getting sick of divorces I got gumptions
    But my mind became worse my rhymes was reverse this nickel
    And dime curse must disappear not a comedian like Don Rickles
    A winner with strange crews I interchange screwballs for smarter
    Folks that can come with harder quotes and make me martyr
    In rap my head falter led to altars for a sacrifice because
    My facts are nice there’s no crack in my life so pause
    With the execution there’s a complex solution to all
    Of this, got a clogged dome left the dog home alone yall
    In the arena bow wow eating Purina chow so my pup is up
    To bark but no bite scratching fleas no leash he’s kinda stuck
    My brain exert a force while alert on course to thinking
    It attract girls as facts are hurled about sex while winking
    My eyes write alarm and unite charm with my rhymes
    And come up with a verbal storm that twist and align minds,
    Fought in the slums with guns as thoughts have become one
    Aimed at escaping now lame and taking drugs having dumb fun
    Use to hang out with strange folks which has changed my hopes
    Their influence has rearrange my quotes now no promise in the notes
    I jot down, my Ebonics are original like electronic signals they promotes
    Sound waves and crown babes with kisses and digital anecdotes
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You've got word play coming and going, rhymebad.
     
  3. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the props on this one for real
     
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    Brother rhymebad, I like this one a lot. Like the part when you said," I jot down, my Ebonics are original like electronic signals they promotes
    Sound waves and crown babes with kisses and digital anecdotes" that was real nice.

    hee,hee,hee-
    Much Love,
    Desert Storm
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    enjoyed the piece love.........
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the props and responses
     
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