Black Poetry : Drop of Pureness

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Drop of Pureness

    This stuff is hot my brother they lay on top of each other
    And pile up my style corrupt like Frankenstein they smother
    While I’m thinking rhymes stinking chimes ring its butter
    Read the bazaare bible but my car unreliable with a flat
    Tire now have a fat desire strong to shop at Firestone catch
    A sale and strap on some Mickey Thompson’s tricky like
    Charles Bronson in the movie Death Wish its quickly hyped
    Abuse on the board and use a sword like ZORO my flow go
    Cut off heads like HIGHLANDER as mr McCloud I’m loco
    Light-hearted write and departed cats who couldn’t they wouldn’t
    Listen, got pride in a dewrag situation guided by imagination pudding
    Eating in the Twilight Zone all night long with bannas and vanilla
    Wafers cats smelling killa vapors Miller beer tapers off like the thrilla
    In MANILLA, in California it smell like the aroma of ammonia
    Got a preset plan of action yet stand wanting stasfaction storming ya
    Like hurricanes cats with worries lame jealous try hold me down
    Any old clown can talk like they good but got nothing to show renown
    Bringing static as a jerk but no dramatic work can’t act on stage hounds
    Whack and in rage for crack your crave sound like a drugged out clown
    Bring crazy drama but your dang baby mama kick you to the curve
    No true words in rhymes slop seem to be locked in a dream as the nerd
    Who couldn’t comeback you plumb whack like Earnest going to camp
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u took it there .....man ! keep it flowing
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Word play off the hook rhymebad, smooth flow.
     
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