Black Poetry : DROP ME

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lilcherry76, Mar 11, 2004.

  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    scoop me up,
    and drop me.

    lay me on the ground,
    and forget about me.

    look at me and look on,
    cuz that's all you do.

    you pretend that we're one,
    but we're two.

    and you scoop me up in your arms,
    and drop me in the light.

    you lay me on the ground,
    but make sure i'm outta sight.

    see bcuz you look at me and look on,
    cuz you ain't diggin my style.

    you pretend that we're together but we're not,
    so i guess i'm the adult and you're the child.

    so don't bother to scoop me up,
    cuz all you'll do is drop me.

    and don't say you love me,
    if you just wanna knock me...........drop me. :fight:
     
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    Ujima Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hot piece! Loved it! That's how it be!

    Stay focused,

    Ujima
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it speak out clearly
    this was deeply felt
     
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    this was loud and clear
    great stand
    flow on
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    There's I and you, but no we. Flow it like ya know it.
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    thanks for the flowing and a falling
    and getting up and falling
    oops...you being dropped..
    Hey.. you aint flopped!
    flow on...
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow:) the message was loud and clear
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah

    way to put it out there lil cherry..way to let um know...you deserve more a whole lot more, than to be drop on the floor....smh
     
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    This is on the real. Like the way you laid this down.
     
  10. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    preciate the love ya'll. preciate it deeply. :wave:
     
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