Black Poetry : Drop me, you never picked me up

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  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its not what he said
    but the fact that he said it
    while walking out his own door
    leaving me lying there
    half naked while he spewed
    "i gotta drop you."
    not giving me an opportunity to
    mask my vulnerability
    to turn quick wit
    and sharp toungue
    to mask my own confusion
    with my own lies
    about how i could give
    two sh*ts about you
    and all the drama you do
    lying up with me all day
    on your time and my dime
    all a waste of my time
    I shoulda said
    you cant drop me because you never
    once picked me up
    never once held me like i held you
    never thought forever while you lied
    and said, just today
    you knew where i was going
    you let me fall anyway
    so, get this
    i dropped you
    i let you go
    i can no longer give you everything
    and expect nothing emotional in return
    i am gently placing you back where you came from
    with no ill feelings or bad intent
    know forever that you made a dent
    my hearts a little harder than before
    a little wiser too
    i see you mad in the corner,
    giving looks to him and me
    I told you i dropped you
    you didn't believe i could?
    believe it now
    as i laugh a little louder than before
    and later i cum wetter than before
    thirty minutes later sidesteppin out the hotel door
    i did it
    i dropped you
    the only way i know how
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wheeeeew!!! when one say get cat another will say here kitty kitty
    this was hot.....
     
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    this is hot like fire and i loved how there bwere several different lawyers of emotions st snuck between the lines.
     
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    wow....this is hot....got raw emotion written allll over this piece.....my throat got kinda tight when I read this...reminds of a place i used to be in .


    good stuff poet!!:snaps:
     
  5. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my best flows come natural with no revisions after signing in here and just breathing. Seems like I have been breathing here since 2002. Unlike lvoers and friends, destee fam never ends. Thanks for reading and breathin with me
     
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