Black Poetry : DROP KNOWLEDGE #5

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DROP KNOWLEDGE #5

    Instruct cats and duck gatts live in a corrupt habitat
    Always getting struck by combat and that’s just my fat
    Luck, scold violence with untold silence, fold try rinse my clothes
    Got blood on my buttons a thug all of a sudden rap dense flows
    Fish in creeks then twist freaks with a brisk speech slap foes
    My list reach the Ghettos and won’t let go it reach the brains of those
    Wann do wrong, my threads greater than a headwaiter while these cats
    Are misled haters, simply the worse and like an empty purse all latch
    And ain’t buying a thing so why yall trying on bling? You thirst
    For jewelry and the curse of fury in your soul your flows disperse
    Rotten cursed and at the bottom of HIP HOP no depth to your whackness
    Need help and practice, your rhymes don’t gain in price like a bad actress
    they lame like mice under a mattress they don’t give information you
    live in intimidation, must make folks aware of your fake stare you not true
    Your true air is stuffy you can’t breathe like FABULOUS you have
    The flows of hags so yall boys throw it in the bag and please don’t grab
    The microphone, your desire is garbage and you can’t acquire knowledge
    By being stupid in HIP HOP, not from the ghetto so get to know my college
    Rhymes, be concerned about art and try to learn by heart how to rip script
    And grip a slip of paper and jot down some hot nouns cause a totally eclipse
     
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    man you droppin heat and flava ......connect da dots and splash them nouns
     
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    Word brother rhymebad drop it hotness son....
     
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    thanks for the peeps and especially for the responses on this
     
  5. Cade Foster

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    If he could connect the dots his rhymes might actually start making some sense.
     
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    Cade Foster I FOUND OUT ONE THING HATE MAKE YOU LOOK STUPID NOW TELL EVERYONE YOU HAVE A SECOND GRADE EDUCATION BECAUSE YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS

    Instruct cats and duck gatts live in a corrupt habitat
    Always getting struck by combat and that’s just my fat
    Luck
     
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    Cade Foster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That wasn't bad, but alot of material in your verse doesn't line up with a theme and tends to be random quite often.
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    but for real if you can do it better do it you haven't wrote anything in awhile don't let me destroy your happiness write some stuff man
     
  9. Cade Foster

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    How could you destroy my happiness?
     
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