Black Poetry : Drop It

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, May 4, 2004.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Drop It

    This is a solid dispatch unique like a batch of concrete
    Build foundations, thrill, hound nations like sick politics in defeat
    Fighting mad with a writing pad my tablet blazes while
    My habit rages like Lenny Kravitz on stages with smiles
    Indicate pleasure, renovate treasure educate, measure profiles
    With written sketch hidden yet are side views as pride renews
    Go to the store and pick out sick clout, choose the blues
    Hear music about rainy days and brainy ways to solve hurt moods
    Explain mean to make clear and face no fake fear or clues
    With grammar express pain and the stress on the brains
    Friction test my aims must overcome the scum and maintain
    My footing to success, putting the rest behind me in the game
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bomb: a that was hot
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just writing and flowing as you feel, not to impress, yet it does anyway.
     
  4. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this one :hot:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MADD heat off dis one
    tyte scribe bruh !
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed reading this to the max. it flowed well...keep shooting.
     
  7. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    really appreciate the responses on this sometimes the short ones are the best ones I see
     
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