Black Poetry : Drop It Quick

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Nov 23, 2002.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Drop It Quick

    Never hesitative with decision like an administrative division
    Paperwork towers as vapor perk from flowers in nature’s collision
    Even as rain or hale your flame couldn’t prevail locked in prision
    Silently whack when in violently contact with this verbal fission
    Like bacteria crawl superior into your food on a rude mission
    Your rhymes single cell and they don’t mingle well with my vission
    Be alert and on course while I exert force and bound you herbs
    Clowns remain absurd in towns and suburbs try rap nouns and verbs
    Even as a driveway you couldn’t survive on today’s reomote roads
    Smoke codes and broke toads back a boat of your facts corrodes
    Can become quickly educated in an area thickly populated
    And strictly renovated without guns but cats slickly cooperated
    In crime, like pension plans, money another dimension man
    Acts of thugs is to get back rubs these are real facts about love
    The kiss path loves the bathtubs, but why is crack fed to a scrub?
    On this city ranch just saw a shitty avalanche rock falling
    Cats on the block calling out for drugs and balling
    It’s moral and pictorial like a photo, sight gone loco
    An extreme degree of crime don’t seem to free the mind
    Even a tree climb wouldn’t suffice for a nice escape from these times
    Sickness beyond the proper limit not even a doctor can dim it
    Must build a structure in order to thrill the culture and wear tims legit
    Out class brother and surpass other

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...>floats in>

    Madd, it has been awhile since I have been active on the boards, but it is nice to comeback and be greeted by a flow as excellent as this. This piece is the essence of fire itself. I really enjoyed the read.

    Keep the flow moving...

    <floats out<...
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As always Poetical Political Profundity!

    You went deep with this one! Thanks for sharing
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
  4. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Legendof_1_Spirit and msluciousb thought I had lost the touch for while reall love yall responinding to this for real
     
  5. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    +VEry tacful
    flow on
     
  6. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blkthunder thanks for responding to this very taste ful huh? try to be
     
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