Quiet Poetry Lounge : "Drop dead" ..gorgeous

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by queentswana, Oct 9, 2004.

  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Drop dead gorgeous


    I'm "17", and I'm as fly as hell,
    look at me girls...can't you tell?
    :em0200:
    Rapping is my greatest fame,
    I rapp so well, it became my name.

    I rapp about pimps and ho#'s on the street,
    I rapp about the ho#'s, that fall at my feet.

    My eyes are dreamy...I know I'm fine,
    cause I witnessed 4 girls one night, standing in line.

    Then my rapps got "tighter" my head got "bigger",
    and for a minute or two ...I was the bigger ni@@er.

    At "17", I met this "die for" red-bone,
    so I left those "low-class" ho#'s alone.

    Yeah, me and miss "ta die for", kicked it for awhile,
    but I found that this "red-bone" ...wasn't my style.

    By the age of "19" ...I've had more ho#'s than a little,
    that's when I met, my true love...Ka-lila.

    We kicked it well, and we bored two "seeds",
    they were my two angel's ...yes indeed.

    It was a "girl" for her, and a "boy" for me,
    I'm as happy as any one man can be.

    Years have passed, and I'm now "28",
    and I decided to live right...a little too late.

    Remember the "red-bone", that I rocked for days?
    well that same "die for" red-bone, gave me the AIDS

    Things ain't always "what" and "how" they appear,
    that "ta die for" red-bone...died last year.

    Now I'm standing in line, I'm at 'death's door,
    on my way out...I can't hold on no more.

    Dear God, have mercy...look what I did,
    it's not just me...I infected... my kids

    This is my nephew, we buried him Sept. 7th...on his birthday.



    __________________

    if you set yourself on "FIRE"....the world will come and watch you burn.!
     
  2. OldSoul

    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep heat felt ...........words can't say what i feel
     
  4. 1hotvirgowoman

    1hotvirgowoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's real deep.....
     
  5. IntuitioninMD

    IntuitioninMD Banned MEMBER

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    Food for thought...

    :)
     
  6. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...U told me about this one..Geez...I could just visualize it. Probably the same thing Eazy E's family was going thru and countless or families...U are indeed a great poet, Queen!
     
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