Black Poetry : Dripping with Possibilites

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Howard closed his eyes

    while waiting for the waitress's surprise

    this wasn't the first sunrise

    he disguised his hunger for her conversation by ordering their homemade pies

    but she knew his visits were a disguise

    otherwise

    why would he keep asking her if she’d be willing to handglide some friendly skies with him on her day off

    the idea sounded appealing

    but she had a feeling it’d be better to wait before she said yes to a date

    who knows, maybe he really could be her soulmate

    [Eve sets down the plate]

    ta da!!!!!!!!!!

    [Howard opens his eyes]

    Eve that looks delicious

    i can’t wait to dig in

    did he put the figs in?

    eve :

    of course Howard

    and these are fresh

    the rig just pulled in yesterday

    [Howard takes a bite]

    stupendous Eve!!!!!!!!!!

    what time do you get off tonight?

    eve :

    why?

    howard :

    i’ve got two tickets

    [waving them]

    to the Roy Jones Jr. fight

    eve :

    no way!!!!!!!!!!!

    howard :

    yes way!!!!!!!!!!

    eve :

    i get off at nine

    will that be fine?

    howard :

    perfect

    [takes another bite]

    good pie



    love,

    eve & howard
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The possiblities between them are endless. Very sweet piece, I've missed your pen Howard.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love...

    your choice of title, its very attractive!

    I enjoyed this. I think its fun and flirtatious dialogue.
    and I so enjoy happy endings.

    Thanks for the read.


    Coco
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Howard & Eve return this was fly bruh !
     
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    Oh howard:
    Its always so nice to read you.
    I have missed you and eve.
    Yall shouldn't stay away so long.:)

    Much Luv
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Breath of Fresh Soul Brother Howard.
    Keeping the Roll going Eve and Howard are matched in heaven.
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody :em3600:

    it's good to be back
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man Howard, I have read your art before, and have always be amazed!! Gosh, this is so wonderfully, so creatively posed! I can imagine myself, right in the scene of things...in a small ol' fashioned diner, dishes in the background, Eve with a pot of coffee in her hand, you with a smile on your face.....classic!

    Great, great write friend!! I need to email this to myself...



    :blowkiss:
     
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    classic encounters...

    when everything goes RIGHT. I like the drip drop of endless possibilities.

    NICE.
     
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    Howard - Only the deft hand of the poet can capture a moment like a snapshot and make the reader forget the words but see the impact of their imagery with clarity. That takes talent. Much enjoyed. Namyh
     
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