Black Poetry : Drip drop Drip - Bishop's Pains of Love Series

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Drip drop Drip
    Drop drip Drop
    My tears flow
    Like rain
    Playing tom tom drums
    When I realize you are not here
    A man not afraid to cry
    Drip drop Drip
    Drop drip Drop
    Lonliness possess my body
    And directs my mind
    Into a dark void
    Where you once stood
    But now
    Nothing
    But
    Drip drop Drip
    Drop drip Drop
    My heart turned to stone
    My passion frozen
    Like the coldest ice
    For the heat of your love
    Has been extinguished
    The melody that used to ring
    In my soul
    Now just echoes
    The resounding sound of
    Drip drop Drip
    Drop drip Drop
    Where is my life
    She is gone
    Now there is nothing but death
    The death of a love
    That may never be resurrected
    So I have been condemned to eternal torment
    And the
    Persecuting sound
    Of my tears as it plays on the tom tom
    Drip drop Drip
    Drop drip Drop
     
  2. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful

    Bishop,
    this was another wonderful scribe and sentiment of your heart and sensitivity... Excellent piece I so enjoyed the flow Blessings

    AqueenPassing
    :wave:
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very sad flow, Bish!
    I know you know there is
    always someone wanting
    to catch your tears...
    Peace to ya brah!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u hittin' on all wheels
    da sweet caresser will catch dem tears dat drip drop!!
     
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    Drip drop Drip drop The rhythm of ones pain always seems to silence the rain. echos bouncing and hittin corners of walls. darkness is creeping up to swallow one whole. love will reign again and all will be alright. dont stay to long in its shadows,
    come closer and embrace the light. your scribe is heart felt and definately tyte!
     
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    Umm...my eyes close
    As I take in your pain
    So dark are those lonely nights
    Days will never be the same
    That touch that you miss
    Lips that urge you on
    But the lips are forever gone
    Your stuck hummin that death song
    Bishop my friend
    Don't wallow with the shadows
    Love comes andflied away
    Learn to live and let it go...

    Ttyte scribe B. As always :)
     
  7. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and for each tear shed
    a tribal tune develops
    synonomous
    with a heart, that once beat
    for love

    Nice poem bishop
     
  8. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    perhaps with this death there's a new birth of some love unparrallel, one that'll wipe away tears you wept and all pain you've felt...

    that was bitter-sweet man... but loved the flow fo sho...

    peace
     
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    You wear the name of the cloth very well, the spirit speaks within these walls, this is excellent.
     
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