Black Poetry : Drift Away

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  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    looking high above through
    the infinite sky

    i await to see the one for me

    beautiful green trees and cumulous clouds
    show our love was purely destiny

    let the clock rewind and past through
    time into thunderous harmony

    spinning like the stars upon its axis
    the world shines bright across the
    atlas

    the nation today corrupt and tactless
    subtracting the math we stand to
    remain factless

    let our love swim through ripples of
    the deepest sea floating upon your
    heart bringing it back to me

    your loving arms, tender kisses with
    warm embrace the passion felt all
    over your face is real with massive
    sex appeal

    taking me whole beyond control as
    [COLOR=orange-red]our love[/COLOR] begins to unfold holding me
    close

    midnight strikes return to your
    post better than most drifting away
    across the coast to the deep blue
    sea


    discovering [COLOR=dark red]love[/COLOR] standing before me









    lana1287 productions :cool:
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pd, lil' sista'...this piece is beautiful. but, you must know? i did a piece about the deep blue sea a couple of weeks ago, now. perhaps, one day i will post it. the deep blue sea can be very captivating...yes, indeed. i'm lovin' the flow of this piece, it's very enjoyable. keep on scribin', as i continue to watch.
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PD

    this is a beautiful poem. I like the way you colored ya words here and there. I drifted away with this.... Audio right?





    One
     
  4. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loved it

    in the words of alicia keys, i see he haz u flyin so high in the sky u can't control the butterflz! lovely, a season of love 4 surely, i love this, feeling this
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  5. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Lister,

    goddessoflovepoetrytodanfinitepower :lol:

    thanks for your continued support dear

    i'll still be reading :)

    pd
     
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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    UbZo,

    how you know???

    it was too obvious huh :confused:

    yeah and you know this ;)

    pd
     
  7. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    DS,

    yeah i feel Alicia Keys on the skill myself

    it's just something about those butterflies


    pd :)
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hee hee hee

    sing it.
    Desert Storm
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you're making me jealous :D

    other than that this one's pretty tyte.

    scratch sending pm. will you be home tomorrow?!?
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PD

    this is a nice piece...no doubt...beautiful piece

    blak
     
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