Quiet Poetry Lounge : Dreams

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Feb 25, 2012.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diggin out of the dream
    Be able to go back over
    And
    Prolifically analyze you've been somewhere ya can't name.
    Tryin 2 remember what once was forever.
    Giving the sense of being doomed.
    Recognizing another whole demension of color.
    Once set freethe colors of the color light combine.
    To awake finally in the recapping of dark colors.
    In order 4 me to grad hold from another primanisha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    watching da images you paint before me......great piece
     
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    Dear Sister Poet Candeesweet,

    You painted the subject's anguish beautifully. I felt this.
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm so happy my poetic friends are feeling me :)
     
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    Candeesweet,

    Say that thang you do
     
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